Aet Lindling

You%u2019ll be very pleased when you get to the third chapter and see what I did with the AN.

Oh, I get you! It%u2019s kind of a mixture of foreshadowing and just the fact that we are peering inside her raw thoughts. Think A Song of Ice and Fire. ...

Thank you so much! I am sorry (ironically), I feel the need to apologize far too often. It is a plague. I tried to keep it shorter with the third ...

Hopefully pixels enjoys this one, as I’ve been promising better interpersonal dialogue and character development and articulation and stuff since pretty much the beginning now but this is the first ...

I'm glad you agree on that very important plot point! I also greatly appreciate the ego-plumping of the first few paragraphs. As for the rest, I am pleased to say ...

Thank you kindly for this review! I'm very glad you enjoyed it overall. This is only one of about five main characters I have in a world I%u2019ve been building ...

It was a pretty self-absorbed author%u2019s note referencing things nobody reading is likely to remember about me. I%u2019ll adjust the spacing as suggested, especially given I use an ellipse by ...

Okay, questions as Tikaya suggested. Well, for one thing, was the metaphor used to swiftly get across the meaning of “Leibnizian monad” clear enough? I was kind of proud of ...

mephistopheles, this is the author of the original, albeit blank, work. =P

This is a good surrealist satire playing on both my post as well as the original work through a meta-connection. I enjoyed reading your comment and hope to see you ...

Could you elaborate on your opinion on the verse and the importance of your changes?

A sign you're a fairly bad writer: You write this

Now that you've edited this to note that it's a haiku some things are different of course, however I think most of my review still applies.

This is a pretty bad Harry Potter fanfic. Since when is Harry a pop star? I liked him in the Rowling books better.

Ahahah, what a story Mark.